this is just brilliant :woohoo: as I already said it... !

Benzaie's word is law. 'Nuff said! As for the comedy stylings of our podcast host? Hmmmmm....

Chris, you got mad skills, dude. There's not much else I can say my friend.

Haha, well... that was funnier than I thought it'd be. I usually don't watch amateur stand-up for a couple of reasons, but you've genuinely amused me.

My only piece of advice is that you lay on your jokes a bit heavier and give the audience more time to laugh, afterward. Possibly a funny voice here and there and some odd hand movements that can be developed into something freshmen repeat on a daily basis for about a month.

"Clearly you have your own ride home..." Ouch. Laughed hard, but ouch man. :D

Fun set. And you know technically everyone is a Body Builder. Just not everyone is into Muscle Sculpting. But really anyone can "build their bodies". Every time they eat.

That was pretty good! Awfully offensive, but well, comedy club lol. Still very funny.

I hate to admit I wasn't expecting much, but that was actually really good. That was even better than some "professional" comedians. Keep at it.

I thought that was pretty funny! My only real suggestion would be to work on your timing a bit with some of the punchlines, like leaving a little pause to let the build up settle in before you deliver the punchline. I thought the jokes, while pretty dirty, were definitely hilarious.

That was really good. I loled.

This is a definite improvement over your previous video. This is some hilarious material!

Still, though, you have to watch the fidgeting on stage - it can distract the audience a bit. Otherwise, excellent job!

We need to see more of stuff like this dude. Well done.

a little bit of a slow start but overall pretty funny.

VERY good set! Just PLAN your movements a bit-- the only thing that detracted from your VERY good material was your movement. My old days on speech team taught me this-- every movement means something. Your crouching/peering at the beginning was planned-- make the rest of your action JUST as planned and you'll be great!

I have to say, I wasn't going to watch this after seeing your last stand up vid, but I am GENUINELY impressed by how radically you improved. PLEASE show more soon! Keep being awesome!!

This was extremely funny. I didn't actually laugh, but I laugh maybe 1/100 times at something that I think is funny. It was very entertaining. Hope to see some more!

Time for criticism. Well, the jokes overall were a lot better then your last one, I'll say that. The only thing that needs work is your stage presence and delivery, and that gets everybody. I more then understand that being on stage can be stressful, even sub-consciously, and it is nigh impossible to practice doing better without trial and error. Just memorize your material, and as someone mentioned above, use your body more. You've got greatness, this was very entertaining.

That was very good, Chris! I like dirty and offensive jokes. The only thing you need to work on is not pacing back and forth, cause it can get really distracting. Try to stay in one spot and don't move around as much.

Other than that, it was better than the first one and you seemed to have more of a crowd this time.

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the pacing hurts your delivery, It makes things seem impersonal. The key to comedy is confidence, especially when it comes to self-deprecating humor. It is a good way to work honestly and your set is really funny, you just need to work on your confidence and know that when you go up there that what you are saying is good and that if you deliver it well it will be good. More audience interaction would not be terrible either, perhaps a better set up for the Wii joke, asking a specific girl in the audience if she performs fellatio well, preferably someone with a date or boyfriend. it really gets people off their guard and then the comedy truly sinks in. I loved the set though, very strong material and if you keep working on it I think it would be great!

Offensive stand-up is the best kind. Way to go!

That was pretty funny! :D

As some people else said. I didn't think you'd be very funny either. In fact, I didn't even expect you but the title got me so I watched it.

And you know what, I was surprised, you're pretty funny and our expectations that you weren't that funny come from that you aren't like, the most popular on the site/what I'm saying is that, you don't get as many views/comments as say, Doug or Spoony does in there videos but really, I liked it.

Especially since we fans at That Guy with the Glasses love FUCKED UP AS SHIT humor.

I've seen numerous stand up acts, and I thought yours was very good. I remember seeing one of your videos from quite a while ago (must be at least 6-10 months ago), and you have improved a lot on how you present yourself on stage.

Very good, keep it up!

Well that was better than the last one you uploaded to TGWTG, you're doing something right! I look forward to seeing the next one, with some new material.

"I dont see the problem, clearly you have your own ride home"

Holy crap I laughed so hard at that.

the wheel chair think was a tad low... but i liked it , nice work man keep it up

pretty good, a lot of potential there, just keep working at it, and I am sure you will find success.

I loved your stand up. The ways you can improve. 1. Don't act so nervous.
2. Most overweight comedians wear bright clothing.
3. Timing was a bit slow.
Other than that as the video went on the jokes got better, too bad your bit was so short. I think if they gave you a half hour you could really shine oh and if that club was bigger like the one I live near, the famous Improv Comedy Club in Miami.

The only real problem I had is that you at one point you were sarcastic with the duck tape thing. Although sarcasm is good for conversations, I don't think it makes good comedy, unless done perfectly. But I'm just nit picking. Hilarious job.

You did better. You still have a slight problem with stammering, but that's manageable. There's one joke that just went nowhere as soon as you started it, but again, working on it solves that dilemma. Also, perk up the jokes a bit, and possibly get more active in the sell.

Colors you're wearing really don't mean that much when it comes to skin color.

I would try to make a joke about Match.com trying to hook you up with your dad, and the possible repercussions from that. That would make that segment ten times more hilarious.

For inspiration, I'd look into some Brian Posehn standup. He has pretty much the same delivery style as you, and is freaking hilarious to boot.

bahahahaha fantastic man that was even better than last time haha =]

I think you need to work a bit on your stage performance, the joke was funny don't get my wrong but if you relaxed a bit more and took in the audience more instead of running around the punchline will have a better effect.

Other then that I was entertained Rollo, your funny as hell but you looked so nervous when you ran around and that is what I think you need to work on, be on stage so much it feels comfortable B) :cheer:

Still need some work but you're not half bad. The best comedians act comfortable regardless if they are or not. Need to relax more on stage, then the timing will be easier to pull off.