Vampire Stalkers Part I
Written by Bennett The Sage Sunday, 25 July 2010 22:25
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This has actually inspired me to do a fanfic just in the hopes that he finds it and reads it on his show ^__^
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07.25.2010 - 23:45 | GTO Neko
*just falls to the side, with my leg twitching*
....fangirl much?!
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07.26.2010 - 00:05 | ThatGuyInTheHeadband
That was... intresting. I do love how you got LK to do the voices of the canon characters.
So, is this supposed to be an alternate universe or something? I mean, there is no way this fits within the Yu-Gi-Oh canon. And I just realized how big of a nerd I am for noticing that. :0
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07.26.2010 - 18:08 | whatever42
Don't worry. There have been plenty of much nerdier things said here.
As for the story, it could have been worse. I mean, comparatively speaking, it's pretty good ...
:sigh:
for the ones shown on this show, at least.
Also, nice job on getting LittleKuriboh to do voices for this. Great idea you had there. In fact, you might want to consider having voices for subsequent episodes. Either way, another interesting episode of MFT.
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07.26.2010 - 00:23 | nemesis274
I gotta be honest, the fanfic is not really terrible, but it's just really funny and stupid. And no one other than Little Kuriboh can make a YuGiOh fanfic all the more bearable.
And btw, when it comes to vampire romances, I will take Seto and Joey over Edward and Bella anyday. Who's with me?
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07.26.2010 - 01:25 | Marabou
here here
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07.26.2010 - 15:56 | WaterElemental
HERE HERE!!
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07.27.2010 - 01:56 | Raistlinhawke
HERE HERE!
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02.01.2011 - 19:18 | Casandraelfamen to that...even if it's incredibly cracktastic and OOC
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07.26.2010 - 00:32 | MetalGearSamus
Oh god, that last part was hilarious, "It's supernatural, therefore normal." XD I can't believe people actually write this stuff seriously. XD Nice job with the reading.
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07.26.2010 - 01:04 | animehater daveWould have been hilarious if littlekuriboh actually made the moaning sounds himself.Also, what the hell would be the science behind such a pregnancy? Does vampire semen just magically sprout eggs in human males? And how the hell would such a child be born? Especially if this has happened before the rise of modern medicine.
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07.26.2010 - 10:41 | ThatGuyInTheHeadbandIf you think about it, it could be weirder, like if a girl vampire gets a normal human of either gender pregnant. o_O
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Everytime I have a friend who is thinking of writing that into her fanfiction espically if they have the vampire carrying the child of another vampire I ask her: "Would you expect a baby chicken to live in a broken incubator?"
Honestly it just turns me off in fanfiction because that is just stretching it even in a non-canon story.
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07.26.2010 - 01:13 | Valzahd
That was incredibly entertaining. Just hearing Little Kuriboh speaking the lines had me cracking up. You should consider having others do character voices in the future.
I also have to agree with a few other posts. The writing wasn't that bad, just novice. With more practice she could really shine... As long as she doesn't stick with gay anime slashfics...
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O.K. Joey's voice had me cracking up, especially when he was confused. But really besides the tmi on the yaoi (or yuri im not sure) and the pregnant story arc this was the least horrible of the fanfiction you've reviewed. I thought that some of the dialouge was intentionally funny, and i dont folow yugioh at all so that didn't bother me.
Really funny review keep it up, and for your sake I hope this doesnt get worse than it already is...
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07.26.2010 - 01:20 | Deimos1984rd
Oh god........ :sick: the fact that there's pics of this scares me...
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07.26.2010 - 01:23 | MarabouThe pictures were drawn for this review, don't worry to much about them, they're part of TGWTG, not the fan fic
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07.26.2010 - 01:22 | Marabou"I'm carrying a human/vampire baby!!!"
This was too funny. I was cringing and laughing all at the same time!
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07.26.2010 - 14:11 | johnkenpwnsThe image accompanying the scene made it priceless. XD
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07.26.2010 - 01:31 | M.Seijin
:notfunny: I hope this person failed his creative writing class. I sincerely do. I also think that vampires should disappear from story telling for at least a century or 2 until society has been purified and vampires can be scary again.
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07.26.2010 - 01:32 | NasikomanWow, I thought it was just a joke for Yugioh: The Abridged Series, but judging by this story it is apparently a semi-common notion that Joey is in fact a furry who is attracted to Kaiba. Or why would Kaiba call Joey mutt in the first "chapter"?
Also, good job wrangling Dan Green(e?) to do this, Sage. I love it when he and the TGWTG world (as I know it, anyways) intersect. It's like peanut butter and chocolate getting in a car crash and then making sweet, sweet gay furry vampire love to each other.
Oh god, now I have a fanfiction to write. Be back later!
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07.26.2010 - 01:42 | marbles
I, too, was wondering why it took so long to get to the butt-f**king. Good thing Joey could accept his sexuality over breakfast, so that piece of tension could be ripped out and give some more time to the detailed description of the house.
UUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGHHHH! =_=
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07.26.2010 - 02:48 | BenjaminBupkus
But Joey's house deserved more attention than sexual identity drama. After all, Joey's house was made out of fun.
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07.26.2010 - 13:05 | eviljim
I too wanted to know about Joey's house, after all it seems that the furniture and wallpaper get more attention and characterization in this mess.
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07.26.2010 - 01:55 | M.SeijinWait! I've got it! This is part of Melvin's evil plan! First he kills Bakura and Marik and cancels Yu Gi Oh Abridged, and now he's cashing in on both the yaoi and Twilight crazes by writing this horrid filth which is ultimately meant to reduce out brains to mush so that we put up no resistance to him and his army of darkness! :onoes:
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07.26.2010 - 02:05 | Kimo
I loved this. I can't believe you got LittleKuriboh to do the voices. :D
This is the first time I've ever sat completely through one of your videos, and I loved every minute of it. I can't wait for part 2! Keep up the good work!
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07.26.2010 - 02:13 | Lodevijk
The author seems to have some weird misconceptions about sexuality. "I like him. That must mean I'm gay". Well isn't that convenient for the story.
Huge thumbs up for convincing LittleKuriboh to voice this crap.
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07.26.2010 - 02:46 | BenjaminBupkusEasy turning? It's like easy evangelism, only sexual!
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07.26.2010 - 02:20 | The Dutch GuyScrew biology, I am a vampire!
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I will never look at Yu-Gi-Oh! the same ever again... I mean, I get the whole Kaiba X Joey thing that fans might make up, but to actually hear a story all about this romance...is creepy.
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07.26.2010 - 02:35 | DaraliiPart of me wonders what Bennett did to get LittleKuriboh to voice this. My god that was horrible. =_=
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07.26.2010 - 02:45 | BenjaminBupkusOWH MAW GAWD I'M PWEGNANT! I'M GAWNA HAFFA HALF-VAMPIYUH, HALF-HYUMAN BAY-BEH!
That part, coupled with the silly artwork, made the whole video.
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07.26.2010 - 02:57 | Nash
"THIS CAN'T BE HAPPEN!"
=D
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07.26.2010 - 03:24 | remmy1234
Someone set us up the shock.
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07.26.2010 - 03:31 | SpecterM91
I thought it'd be hilarious to hear you and Little Kuriboh reading something like this, Sage. But I have to say, I think I'm scarred for life. Never do I want to hear you graphically describe vampire buttsecks. :l Regardless, you two did a good job, I can't believe no one burst into laughter or tears while reciting this nonsense, that alone earns you both a medal of sheer manly balls.
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07.26.2010 - 03:34 | repogirl91My god, LittleKuriboh's Joey voice cracks me up anyway, but hearing him say lines like, "I'm pregnant!" was fantastic. XD
I love the bit about Kaiba hearing vampires can reproduce with humans of either gender. That just failed.
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07.26.2010 - 03:48 | RedrallyThat lemon sucked! :angry:
Seriously, as weird as this sounds there are some good male couples written in the fanfic universe...you just won't find it in the YGO section.
Yeah...fanfic lemons are my substitute for porn, so sue me.
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07.26.2010 - 03:51 | traceaceSo I'm going to admit it, I was sitting here going "eh, not the worst fic with this subject.", since I've seen what people do with such a stupid premise in other fandoms and it's...never pretty, really.
And then the end came and I understand now why you picked this over what was probably many others. T_T
MPreg continues to be one of the only "fads" in fanfiction I have yet to at least see the appeal to (even if I don't agree with it being entertaining). I'm almost afraid to see what happens next. =_=
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07.26.2010 - 04:10 | Kaiju-Z
Fuck of the mind. I just had it. =_=
On a positive note, having LK do the voices and there being artwork here made it less painful than the previous fics you've read.
Oh boy - next month vampire birth. This will be painful, won't it?
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The characters aren't sociopaths and this story hasn't been made into a series of god-awful movies that have made far more money than should be allowed. There for, I bestow the "My Story about vimpire romance isn't as unforgivably Horrendious as Twilight" award.
You've earned it, (Insert Author's name I forgot already and don't care enough to check; here), you've earned it.
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07.26.2010 - 05:07 | LikaLaruku
Wait, I missed what the fic was about. The vampire guy from Dark Stalkers?
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07.26.2010 - 21:27 | Shadowdancer21b
Yes, it's about Dimitri. :eyebrow:
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07.26.2010 - 05:26 | projoe719srise
I think can the people likeing this if only it was because of the images going through their heads were the same as the art shown in this video witch helpd alot
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DUDE, SERIOUSLY, STOP THE POINTLESS FIRST COMMENTS!!!
Back on topic, honestly, I'm suprised seto didn't start sparkling in this piece of crap. Little Kuribo definitely managed to make this a little more bearable though.
Edit: Althooough, I have to admit the writing isn't [i]horrible[/i], just amateurish and extremely stupid, which is more than can be said for most of these fanfics.