Cloud Mows The Lawn

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  • Dragoniangirl
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    Oh dear god! Why?! WHY?! :X

    I will never look at Baby Ruths the same way again.
  • Nathan Warford  - A suggestion for future reading
    if you thought this was bad on a visceral level, he should try reading Sonichu fan fic/web comic. That shit nut punches you in the fucking soul :X
  • Dio212
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    Good god man, That is like getting raped in the brain.I both read it and saw the godawful audiobooks. You would unleash such a horror upon these poor souls? Damn, you got balls.
  • robokill387
    the audiobooks aren't so bad when you factor in the material they're working with.
  • pharmmajor
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    Dear lord... never has a story made me want to vomit so much since I read "The Tale of Scrotie McBoogerballs". Honestly, who would write something like this?!
  • QuestionTheMajority
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    I'm happy to know I wasn't the only person making that connection.
  • Simian Radio
    [i]"...her gorgeous bowels..."[/i]

    Yeah, that line was when I started laughing hysterically. Who...just who writes that? Who THINKS that a bowel can be gorgeous?!
  • e33laf
    I don't even know how you would be able to tell if someones bowels are gorgeous, considering that they're internal organs and can't be seen outside the body.
  • PvtMadness
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    The guy who wrote this debacle, obviously. I think there is a word for this kind of thing, but it escapes me at this time. And I agree: WHY?
  • Nerdking  - No words
    ...can describe this :X
  • Nyar
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    So... many... poo!
    After listening to this story Saló is like a fairy tale for little children... well no, its still perverted and sadistic but not as disgusting in comparation.
  • Limecat
    No, Salo is still worse. Much worse. In this one, they both enjoy it. It was forced in Salo.
  • Nyar
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    For me the fact that someone enjoys this is what makes it so disgusting. At least the kids in Saló did it because they had no other choice. This people take plesure in eating crap!
  • Logaman
    Ehh.

    After My Immortal I think I've become quite desensitized to fanfics. Now every time I hear that beginning piece of music, ( The name escapes me) I think of that fic.

    This is disgusting true, extremely disgusting, but that's all it is. No substance of terribleness when compared to my immortal.
    It actually haunts me.
  • Balthus  - Sounds of Wiinter
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    The music is from the first movement of Vivaldi's Winter Suite. It caught my ear when The Sage aired his first fan-fic review. The day that many an unsuspecting viewers innocence crawled into a hole and died.
  • takineko
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    Ok I thought I could handle that but there was just too much DO NOT WANT
  • Wilwarin
    WTF?!

    :0
  • D.W.A.P.
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    :cheer: This is one of the few fanfics i've read on my own all the way through. :0 Didnt know there were other chapters though.
  • Ecco  - ...
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    OMG THAT MUSIC! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    That Baby Ruth clip was hilarious. XD
  • heatherwright24
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    @ ThatGuyInTheHeadband it goes along with rule 34...if it exists, there's a fetish for it
  • D.W.A.P.
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    I fact checked it's rule 41.
  • lordio
    You are most correct.

    In fact, the version I have reads thus: "41: No matter what it is, it is someone's fetish. No exceptions."

    Beware rule 51, however. "There will always be more fucked up shit than what you just saw."

    OT: I'm mostly desensitized to this sort of thing (evidently, though I couldn't say for sure why).

    I raised an eyebrow the first time Tifa decided a floor is fine too, but after that, I just resigned myself to the fact that this was the theme.

    Interesting that you're pulling from AFF.net now. Leave it to people writing fap-fic to mostly ignore any sort of story or other interesting premise.

    Getting curious what you're going to do with that laughter.
  • theSnark
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    For example: Shitting dick nipples, and demonic phallus monster shitting dick nipples. :sick:
  • Lotus Prince
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    Naw, rule 34 is "there is porn of it."
  • ToonNinja
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    Don't forget #34.5: If there isn't porn of it, there will be. :scared: Hell, Internet rules have come into play a LOT more than I thought they ever would. When I watched Silence of the Lambs, there was a little voice in the back of my head talking about #63.

    ...Oh, and regarding the fanfic itself... WHAT THE FLYING FUCK [size=large]WAS[/size] THAT? :flame: o_O =O :scared: :angry: :dizzy: T_T
  • Paranormal Rob
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    What was that? The Final Fantasy version of The Aristocrats?
  • TobysTardis  - :
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    What. The. Fuck? Seriously?

    That's just...ew. Oh god, ew.
  • The Gravekeeper
    Gross, but I've scarred my poor lil' brain with far worse by now. At least no one gets seriously injured (or killed) with this particular fetish as unsanitary as it is. Seriously, if you eat feces you're probably going to wind up with a whopping case of e-coli.
  • MichaelDj54
    ....*Snrk*....*Chuckle*.. ..*Uproarious laughter*

    ....I read this story before. I was hoping you would.

    OH...Oh god...the Baby Ruth...the Nightmare...you sick bastard....
  • DJJ66
    It's official... FFVII fans are deranged.
  • Asuka Soryu
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    Yes, because one person who liked FF7 is sick minded, everyone who likes FF7 must be sick minded. You sir, are a genius. (drops Sarcasam anvil on you)
  • Cyborcat
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    Every single fandom there is has its share of sickos.

    Frankly, this didn't scar me as much as the mental image of a guy going down on a cat (Artemis's Lover, which was a Sailor Moon fic, BTW), probably because that was an honest attempt at erotica *shudder* where this was most likely a troll fic.
  • giniku
    My thoughts when I first saw this on the front page? "OH NO DON'T DO IT! D: " I made that face and everything.

    Thanks for making it funny.
  • Stray
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    It could be worse... Could end up like My Immortal or something...

    Course this is has the potential to be
  • YumeKamiAika  - ...Girl poo?
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    ...Honestly, this wasn't [i]that[/i] bad. I found myself just going "...Dude...No." At the most. Huh, I guess Celebrian did prepare me for such things. Despite it being y'know a troll fic, Celebrian.

    [i]...Cloud guided his dick toward her anus and the shit that hung from it.[/i]
    ...Waaat x'DDD

    [i]Tifa farted again, and Cloud felt a pleasant breeze on his member. [/i]
    Pfffft.

    Okay I lied, the shit eating made me gag a little. I have to draw the line there. Oh god Baby Ruth...But everything else was...still bad but it wasn't like "ZOMG IM GONNA DIIIIIIE."

    ...Girl-poo?
  • Serenity Frost
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    Okay, that one shot of you slowly eating a Baby Ruth actually made me fall on the floor laughing. I'm not kidding; I fell out of my chair. It drew attention to my room and people came in to see what I was laughing about. Suffice to say my mother will never look at me the same again. Thanks, Sage!
  • Phoenixangelgal
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    I made it halfway before I had to stop.

    God, it's like 2 girls in 1 cup... ugh...
  • docpye
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    OH man, I just could not stop laughing through all of this.

    Best MFFT yet.
  • AwayToHit  - WTF is this shitty shit?????
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    :X :X :X :X :X :X ....and an other :X I think thats enough...oh wait... :X :X
  • Ashariel
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    *fart*

    *giggle*
  • sardns
    omg this is freaking hysterical. I feel sorry for the poor soul who is/has/will have sex with the sick fuck of an author with a poo fetish (that is assuming the author CAN get someone to have sex with him/her)
  • afromanflounders
    Huh, didn't realize it until you started eating the Babe Ruth, but I was eating chedder popcorn the whole time I was watching this...
  • Nasikoman
    It will never last. Cloud will leave her at age 45 for a sweet young thing with a colostomy bag. For the record, I made it to 14 min 01 sec and refuse to go any further. *gags*

    Oh, and I don't remember too much of it but I don't recall any scene from My Immortal which is anywhere near as brain-bleachingly awful as this.
  • FSS  - re:
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    [quote=Nasikoman]It will never last. Cloud will leave her at age 45 for a sweet young thing with a colostomy bag. For the record, I made it to 14 min 01 sec and refuse to go any further. *gags*

    Oh, and I don't remember too much of it but I don't recall any scene from My Immortal which is anywhere near as brain-bleachingly awful as this.[/quote]

    That's because My Immortal has the power to stop your thought process.

    Funny review though. I wasn't too grossed out, but I rarely ever am.

    Edit: Wait this wasn't a review... what should I call it? A funny read?
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